+Help_Me+

I will not lie, when I first open this up I did not know you did this. Really just the leap in style and format is really breathtaking and I think shock value in this leap in improvement is what really make up this rating.

I'm absolutely loving the clean lines and the very influential and mood setting tones you took with your textures (That mask? Wonderful decision!)

Now there are a few breaks in this piece that have make this weak. Your textures set the mood but were not all placed in the best places. Your background texture is low on the rez count and is to stretched. As well as it makes the background look a bit thrown together -I always using textures for accenting background color, not being the entirety of it. The noise texture was well placed but also brings light to the fact that your coloring is flat. (it would've been stronger if you had covered the stain going down his wing as well. His t shirt logo is trying to get away from his chest and is giving his toros and odd indent.

All together it looks interesting and is a big improvement but now its time to clean up those little things that fall through the cracks uwu

Also..I can't really give to much to originality because this is fanart based off an au..and no matter how lovely it is, its a concept i've seen multiple times I hope you wont be mad